OUGD504 - Type in context - Feedback

Before

Considering I had already made a lot of changes before feedback due to insufficient black and white photos, I had to strip back my booklet from 26 to 16, that then forced me to change my front cover from 'A2Z' to 'Issue 16' I wasn't necessarily ready for the feedback but I came out of it understanding of how I will finish my booklet. 

Things spoken of;

• The concept wasn't clear 
• Use the typography in the image onto the context page
• Place the location of the store/building
• Place all letters from the images within one page

After

Heres the changing of the booklet layout, I think overall its much better then my first layout consideration but because I'm introducing different printing techniques I think its better to keep a more modern approach to the booklet in keeping it consistent,