- Brighter colours or colour stock would look good.
- Nice illustrations, maybe add colour to them or colour to the numbers, the blue looks quite clinical.
- I like the use of colour to divide the sections, but i would like to see more contrast
- I think its a clear well ordered design. just lacks a bit of impact which could come from stronger colours.
- Maybe something to signify it continues onto the back.
- I think you need to strengthen your illustrations, maybe develop the shapes and thicken the lines just experiment. Also consider a strong grid system for your layout.
- The order is good, makes it easy to follow step by step.
- Constant flow between each step would look good, arrows etc.
The bold text is what changes I made that helped improve my design, as for the others I tried but didn't work as it took away the simplicity and for colour it distracted a consistent reading flow.
Overall the feedback received allowed me to bring a consistent flow of direction to my final outcome.
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